Rules, as set out by Deb Thornton my English professor:
Dashes are used for yelling in sentences.
Commas and semi colons cast a casual or subtle emphasis,
Parenthesis bring down the text inside of them, things that can be skipped over if you need to read fast.
I never knew. Now you do too.
Imposing form upon ideas created yet not captured. "The symbol works on you whether you are aware of it or not" ~Flannery O'Connor
Tuesday, January 27, 2009
A poem I just wrote off the cuff, to put on my wedding website.
Oh the fun!
These paths were destined to cross
A choice made
No time delayed
Then a move
A smile from a stranger
A brief passing on the street
Soon closer in view
Passed too quickly, yet soon to be reviewed
To become more familiar
A wrong turn perceived
A warning given
From a stranger in the hall
Familiarity triggered
The street recalled
The smile remembered like the brilliant flash from a camera.
Edit
These rivers were destined to cross
A choice made
No time delayed
Then a move as a wave trying to break from the sea
A smile from a stranger
A brief passing on the street
Soon closer in view
Risen, passed, and settled too quickly, yet soon to be reviewed
To become more familiar
A wrong turn perceived
A warning given
From a stranger in the hall
Familiarity triggered
The street recalled, rushing
The smile remembered like the brilliant flash from a camera
Capturing the magnificent spray on the rocks before
The Ocean recedes.
These paths were destined to cross
A choice made
No time delayed
Then a move
A smile from a stranger
A brief passing on the street
Soon closer in view
Passed too quickly, yet soon to be reviewed
To become more familiar
A wrong turn perceived
A warning given
From a stranger in the hall
Familiarity triggered
The street recalled
The smile remembered like the brilliant flash from a camera.
Edit
These rivers were destined to cross
A choice made
No time delayed
Then a move as a wave trying to break from the sea
A smile from a stranger
A brief passing on the street
Soon closer in view
Risen, passed, and settled too quickly, yet soon to be reviewed
To become more familiar
A wrong turn perceived
A warning given
From a stranger in the hall
Familiarity triggered
The street recalled, rushing
The smile remembered like the brilliant flash from a camera
Capturing the magnificent spray on the rocks before
The Ocean recedes.
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